Nowadays people put too much emphasis on personal appearance and fashion.| My Writings
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국자별 11.08.16. 09:51
hi racher,
hmm let me give some suggestion.

but it entirely shows someone's social position => i think instead of entirely, efficiently or directly could be used. i don't know why but 'entirely shows' seems to be not that common phrase.

nice writing :p i learned a lot.

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